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Her heart pounded heavily. She stared at the screen blankly. No, her mind cried out despairingly. No, this cannot be happening!

“Hey there, sexy babe. Been alone much?” His deep sapphire eyes pierced the semi-darkness as he smiled predatorily at her.

Her eyes flickered nervously as she scanned the words she knew would be permanently imprinted in her mind. They say pictures draw a thousand words; but they would not expect such words to be thrown at them smooth as velvet and lethal as the deadliest poison.

“You know, your eyes really do glimmer like diamonds in the sea. Do you always have men drowning in them, or is it something you had always done knowingly, hmm?” He whispered those words in her ears as he inhaled the slight wisp of delicate rosemary that wafted about her.

No, no, no, she screamed silently. This is impossible. How did he...

“Hair as black as ebony, skin as fair as snow...lips as red as blood. You, babe, are sure today’s Snow White everyone’s looking for. And...I...have...you,” he smirked inwardly and continued caressing her ebony locks, blowing gentle breezes across her neck and watched her shudder.

“Stop it!!” she began screaming with all her might. She pounded against the screen as hard as she could, fear mounting rapidly as she spoke. She couldn’t bear it any longer. Something was happening in front of her, and she could not stop it.
“You remind me of a girl I used to know. She had black hair just like you, snow white skin just like yours...but pity, she refused to be mine,” he said sadly as he fingered her delicate jawline lightly, “What a pity...she would have been even more beautiful by now.”

“Stop...it...”she sobbed loudly as she uselessly pounded the screen. She couldn’t bear to read further. She knew what was to come...what would happen in the end. Desperately, she tried to block off her mind; the stream of memories came gushing like no tomorrow.

“It’s such a pity too...that you pushed me away when I first met you. You would have been such a wonderful bride. But then, you won’t be pretty anymore many years later, right? So what is the point hmm? Why not join us right here, with my everlasting brides that will never age. Immortality till the end,” he whispered suggestively at her ear, ignoring the silent sobs engulfing her body.

Her energy drained, she could only read with fear etched deeply in her eyes. “Please, don’t do this,” she whispered brokenly, her hands bleeding from the sheer force used trying to penetrate the screen. “Please, she’s my only sister...”

He smiled again. He cannot have her, so why not have her sister instead...

Screams filled the air once more.
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Goodness knows if I got the category right @@;; I'm getting confused.

Anyways wrote this in like, what, 10 minutes? Enjoy...cause I have no idea what I just wrote anyway hahahahaa......

I'm on my laptop now so please don't ask where are my artworks...I've been...lazy. ROFL
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Text? I didn't see this coming, but it's nice =)
Honestly, I've been lazy to submit anything too =D

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I think deep down inside we all think we suck--I guess that's what compels us to do better.
Oh we have a writer as well--marverlous! :giggle: Well... I must say that this is most unexpected but refreshing to know that your talent just doesn't lie with drawing alone. This is exceptionally well written and I felt a chill as I read this... very nice. I'm impressed :clap:

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Music and Art are the only drugs I need to make me feel High and Free!
ahahaha thanks ^^; i felt too lazy to scan new arts lol. ironically i scanning one now hahahaha....

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I am who I am so don't bug me if I am not who you think I am and who I should be for you
hahaha....i love writing actually. i have a lot of ideas in my mind but i can never seem to unscramble them properly enough to write something nice :P i wrote fanfics once, mostly based on the online RPG game Ragnarok Online. I find it fun to write fanfics on that cause well, it's pretty much a freeform style i can adapt too ^^ no particular storyplot to follow, just use the maps and jobs as base foundation for a story XDDD

thanks by the way ^^ there was another story i wrote halfway, but it was in my lecturer's laptop so i have no idea whether it's still in that laptop or not lol.forgot to save em ><

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I am who I am so don't bug me if I am not who you think I am and who I should be for you
woot...
nice..
got me all lost for a moment when i saw text :P

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i meditate everymorning,
the subject is on love and peace.....
however i realise i quit within 3 seconds.. - Vash the Stampede
haha thanks. lol i think i should post more words then since everyone's acting all shocked and surprised. what, never expect me to WRITE well? XDDDDDDDDDDDDD

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I am who I am so don't bug me if I am not who you think I am and who I should be for you
lolz...
not write well..
just suprised u'd be obliged to post ur writings here :P

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i meditate everymorning,
the subject is on love and peace.....
however i realise i quit within 3 seconds.. - Vash the Stampede
lol.i was bored, as i had mentioned XDDDD

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I am who I am so don't bug me if I am not who you think I am and who I should be for you
Oh well... you can always think up of a better story :giggle:. Me? I'm more of a poet than a story writer.

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Music and Art are the only drugs I need to make me feel High and Free!

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